Thank you for your feedback. This is for a short film I’m making and part of the inciting incident is that it is never shown what exactly happened to her, the story is more about her journey following that. Here’s the updated one:

After a traumatic event on a night out which leaves her powerless, a naive young woman’s adverse reaction awakens an uncontrollable craving for human flesh as she embarks on embracing her feminine power.

Let me know your thoughts 🙂