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An unemployed mother works hard to get an honorable job as a zookeeper, but then finds herself at the center of an ethical conflict between a zoo and an unorthodox shelter for wildlife.
Is it absolutely important for us to know that she is unemployed? Obviously it won't matter anymore seeing as how she gets the job. ?I am also not clear on who the antagonist: is it her employer (the zoo)? Or is it another zoo and the shelter? I would write it like this: "An inexperienced zookeeperRead more
Is it absolutely important for us to know that she is unemployed? Obviously it won’t matter anymore seeing as how she gets the job. ?I am also not clear on who the antagonist: is it her employer (the zoo)? Or is it another zoo and the shelter?
I would write it like this:
“An inexperienced zookeeper must fight for animal rights when she discovers unethical practices from her new employer and a shelter before a rare elephant is killed”
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This sounds like a really fun concept with a lot of potential for comedy. But could you expand on the antagonist more? I am guessing it has something to do with the Devil? Other than that, I think you have something great on your hands.
This sounds like a really fun concept with a lot of potential for comedy. But could you expand on the antagonist more? I am guessing it has something to do with the Devil? Other than that, I think you have something great on your hands.
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