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  1. Posted: November 10, 2017In: Drama

    When a teenage girl has her robot?s algorithm stolen by her mentor, the only way to expose the truth to is to compete against him at an International Robotics Competition, and win a grant to develop the tech that will allow her paralysed mother to paint again.

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    Added an answer on November 11, 2017 at 11:46 am

    Agree, stakes aren't high enough. What's the International Robotics Competition... is it life or death?? The way it is, you're setting up a final scene where.... we'll just watch two robots painting pictures against each other? And then?how does the teen girl prove it's her design when she's pittedRead more

    Agree, stakes aren’t high enough. What’s the International Robotics Competition… is it life or death?? The way it is, you’re setting up a final scene where…. we’ll just watch two robots painting pictures against each other? And then?how does the teen girl prove it’s her design when she’s pitted against a ? presumably ? powerful corporation.

    If her mother plays a major part, the plot should aim to save her, maybe without this program, her mother’s only connection to the world?and her daughter?disappears, something like that.

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