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  1. Posted: September 26, 2016In: Crime

    When an elder crime boss sits down with a younger crime boss, at a poker game, he must carefully find a way to avoid a gang war and keep everyone at the game calm.

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    Added an answer on September 26, 2016 at 10:40 am

    Updated longline: When an older crime boss sits down with a younger crime boss sits down with a younger crime boss attempting to start a gang war at a poker game, he must find a way to avoid a war and keep everyone at the game calm

    Updated longline:
    When an older crime boss sits down with a younger crime boss sits down with a younger crime boss attempting to start a gang war at a poker game, he must find a way to avoid a war and keep everyone at the game calm

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  2. Posted: September 26, 2016In: Drama

    When a well connected journalist gets double-crossed by a damaged and psychologically abused terrorist, she must find a way to stop her before she releases a biological weapon on an unsuspecting city.

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    Added an answer on September 26, 2016 at 10:33 am

    Overall this longline is fine, but you don't need to mention that the terrorist is "seeking power".

    Overall this longline is fine, but you don’t need to mention that the terrorist is “seeking power”.

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  3. Posted: September 24, 2016In: Action

    When a commando is waken from a coma, he learns that he’s mostly machine and his kids have been kidnapped by a powerful warlord.

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    Added an answer on September 26, 2016 at 10:11 am

    The Longline only describes events, you do not have any action which means there is nothing for a second act of a movie. Without any clear action you do not have a movie. It doesn't matter what the concept is if you do not explain what exactly the character does, even if he has become half machine iRead more

    The Longline only describes events, you do not have any action which means there is nothing for a second act of a movie. Without any clear action you do not have a movie. It doesn’t matter what the concept is if you do not explain what exactly the character does, even if he has become half machine if he doesn’t do anything it doesn’t matter.

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