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When an elder crime boss sits down with a younger crime boss, at a poker game, he must carefully find a way to avoid a gang war and keep everyone at the game calm.
Updated longline: When an older crime boss sits down with a younger crime boss sits down with a younger crime boss attempting to start a gang war at a poker game, he must find a way to avoid a war and keep everyone at the game calm
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See lessWhen an older crime boss sits down with a younger crime boss sits down with a younger crime boss attempting to start a gang war at a poker game, he must find a way to avoid a war and keep everyone at the game calm
When a well connected journalist gets double-crossed by a damaged and psychologically abused terrorist, she must find a way to stop her before she releases a biological weapon on an unsuspecting city.
Overall this longline is fine, but you don't need to mention that the terrorist is "seeking power".
Overall this longline is fine, but you don’t need to mention that the terrorist is “seeking power”.
See lessWhen a commando is waken from a coma, he learns that he’s mostly machine and his kids have been kidnapped by a powerful warlord.
The Longline only describes events, you do not have any action which means there is nothing for a second act of a movie. Without any clear action you do not have a movie. It doesn't matter what the concept is if you do not explain what exactly the character does, even if he has become half machine iRead more
The Longline only describes events, you do not have any action which means there is nothing for a second act of a movie. Without any clear action you do not have a movie. It doesn’t matter what the concept is if you do not explain what exactly the character does, even if he has become half machine if he doesn’t do anything it doesn’t matter.
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