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When the bus of an addicted fantasy gamer stops at a Utopian town, he will do anything to remain there, whilst resisting the unusual secret to their perfect lifestyle.
I can?t help but agree with the other reviewers. There needs to be a clear tie between the character and his goal. What about this ?Utopian town? makes your protagonist want to remain there so badly? Beyond that, I?m confused by the last part. I?m not sure what ?resisting the unusual secret to theirRead more
I can?t help but agree with the other reviewers. There needs to be a clear tie between the character and his goal. What about this ?Utopian town? makes your protagonist want to remain there so badly?
Beyond that, I?m confused by the last part. I?m not sure what ?resisting the unusual secret to their perfect lifestyle? means. Do you mean to say that he is trying to stay himself, not being taken in by this ?secret? or are you saying that the town is actively trying to change him, something akin to ?The Stepford Wives?? The latter is the feeling that I?m getting, but I?m unsure.
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