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  1. Posted: February 22, 2017In: Examples

    When a chauvinistic advertising exec gets the ability to hear what women are really thinking, he gets a shot at outmaneuvering the woman who stole his job.

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    Added an answer on February 26, 2017 at 9:38 am

    The start is good, but she didn?t steal his job. He stole hers and she got fired. Then he had to choose between keeping the job he had earned by ill means, or admit what he had done for the respect of the woman he loves. When he confesses and gives her back her job that she earnt, she fires him as tRead more

    The start is good, but she didn?t steal his job. He stole hers and she got fired. Then he had to choose between keeping the job he had earned by ill means, or admit what he had done for the respect of the woman he loves. When he confesses and gives her back her job that she earnt, she fires him as the first order of business. Even though he is rightfully fired, he gets the girl.

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  2. Posted: February 22, 2017In: Drama

    A fatherless stoner on a fast-track to nowhere discovers the family he never knew is closer than he thinks after he takes a job in a mafia-backed 80s nightclub.

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    Added an answer on February 26, 2017 at 8:54 am

    ...as above. Intrigued by main action in ?80?s themed mafia backed nightclub?.

    …as above. Intrigued by main action in ?80?s themed mafia backed nightclub?.

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  3. Posted: November 7, 2016In: SciFi

    When video game character’s gain self awareness and actually start killing the players, a young widow must complete the game to escape it.

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    Added an answer on November 7, 2016 at 5:11 pm

    Love the premise. Question, when you say 'actually start killing the players' does that mean they die in real life? If she must complete the game to return to reality, how does she know they are dead?

    Love the premise. Question, when you say ‘actually start killing the players’ does that mean they die in real life? If she must complete the game to return to reality, how does she know they are dead?

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