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  1. Posted: March 15, 2020In: Action

    Private: A daughter of a man whom she was build by becomes a cyborg befriending teams up with a group of other young women to stop robots from invading Earth.

    OlDustyDogg Logliner
    Added an answer on March 15, 2020 at 3:02 pm

    The daughter of the man who built her becomes a cyborg is a bit redundant. What is the significance of that relationship to the story? Wouldn't whoever built her be considered her father? It's confusing. This isn't perfect but this is what I get from it. A cyborg girl teams up with other young womanRead more

    The daughter of the man who built her becomes a cyborg is a bit redundant. What is the significance of that relationship to the story? Wouldn’t whoever built her be considered her father? It’s confusing. This isn’t perfect but this is what I get from it.

    A cyborg girl teams up with other young woman to stop robots from invading earth.

    I hope this helps.

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