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When an anonymous series of leaks takes down an illegal arms deal, a former FBI profiler must find the source before the private assassins of a corrupt politician. Coming to terms with the source will force the human race to address the deepest held beliefs and divisions in a world where there can be no secrets.
Hi JasonF, I?d remove the second part of your logline, i?think its better?like that: When an anonymous series of leaks takes down an illegal arms deal, a former FBI profiler must find the source before the private assassins of a corrupt politician.
Hi JasonF,
I?d remove the second part of your logline, i?think its better?like that:
When an anonymous series of leaks takes down an illegal arms deal, a former FBI profiler must find the source before the private assassins of a corrupt politician.
See lessWhen demons plan to steal the devils throne, a greedy rich lawyer dealing for his soul is the only one able to do something about it.
Hello dpg and Richiev, thank you very much for your reviews. I dont think the logline can manage to describe if the character is sympathetic or not. F.e: The Jaws logline just describes the hero as "local sheriff", we cant know if hes likable just by that and i disagree that greedy characters are unRead more
Hello dpg and Richiev, thank you very much for your reviews.
I dont think the logline can manage to describe if the character is sympathetic or not. F.e: The Jaws logline just describes the hero as “local sheriff”, we cant know if hes likable just by that and i disagree that greedy characters are unlikable, theres Michale Douglas in Wall St., Frank Underwood, Dr. Faustus and so on. ?It would be better if i just put “lawyer” instead?
But i sure do agree for the imminent danger, or how Richiev has put?” What are the stakes?”
It was so simple!
“When demons plan to steal the devils throne and jump-start the apocalypse, a greedy rich lawyer dealing for his soul is the only one able to do something about it.”
or
“When demons plan to steal the devils throne and jump-start the apocalypse, a ?lawyer dealing for his soul is the only one able to do something about it.”
Thanks a lot!
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