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  1. Posted: September 19, 2015In: Thriller

    An unfaithful family man with middle-age crisis becomes the only witness of the assassination of his secret lover while the unknown killer manages to pass it for a suicide.

    Oscar Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 22, 2015 at 7:12 pm

    Good point FFF. It actually feels like the film could end right there.How about this?: When an unfaithful family man with middle-age crisis witnesses the assassination of his lover, he becomes obsessed with uncovering the killer to make justice.The key thing here is that he can't just let it go. HavRead more

    Good point FFF. It actually feels like the film could end right there.

    How about this?: When an unfaithful family man with middle-age crisis witnesses the assassination of his lover, he becomes obsessed with uncovering the killer to make justice.

    The key thing here is that he can’t just let it go. Having a lover was the only thing that made his life bearable. So when the killer takes that away from him, the protagonist will make him pay. Makes sense?

    Thanks!

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