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A lonely and renegade pigeon must abandon his reluctance and join the other park residents to expose a corrupt official, stop construction of the mall and save the old fountain, before the end of Independence Day.
Well, Odie, maybe Action is wrong. Besides the motivation is not enough, another detail; it must be more personal than community water. Here, an emotional charge unites the protagonist with the destiny of the source. Maybe he was born there and that's the only thing that reminds him of a family. So,Read more
Well, Odie, maybe Action is wrong. Besides the motivation is not enough, another detail; it must be more personal than community water. Here, an emotional charge unites the protagonist with the destiny of the source. Maybe he was born there and that’s the only thing that reminds him of a family.
See lessSo, it could be: “save the old source, and settle accounts with the past.”
I thought of Independence Day as the ideal setting to unmask the corrupt official and expose him
A lonely and renegade pigeon must abandon his reluctance and join the other park residents to expose a corrupt official, stop construction of the mall and save the old fountain, before the end of Independence Day.
Hola Richiev, si, lo sé. Quise variar el clásico principio "Cuando sucede..." y darle un enfoque diferente. Hay riesgos de que no resulte, ja ja! saludos!
Hola Richiev, si, lo sé. Quise variar el clásico principio “Cuando sucede…” y darle un enfoque diferente. Hay riesgos de que no resulte, ja ja! saludos!
See lessA witty young man resists showing affection, but when his old friend turns out to be in dire need, he must let his emotional guard down.
That is the place for poetry. and subtlety. there may be great drama there. The hero's journey is to overcome his own emotional limitation. It would help to dress the character in a trait that places him at the start of his arc. I don't know if "a witty young man" is clear enough. I would bet on somRead more
That is the place for poetry. and subtlety. there may be great drama there. The hero’s journey is to overcome his own emotional limitation. It would help to dress the character in a trait that places him at the start of his arc. I don’t know if “a witty young man” is clear enough. I would bet on something more affirmative: “a young man obsessed with success” or “an eloquent salesman”
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