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A secretly psychic troubleshooter, after”seeing” an old Nazi secret is part of the trouble she has to “shoot”, has to decide if she can live with it.
Too much vagueness in the logline? (a "troubleshooter" what's that? Sounds like an IT guy). Don't hide the secret from the logline reader and then the "shoot" portion brings more confusion. Remember that a logline is mainly for some Hollywood big shot that has millions of dollars in the bank and isRead more
Too much vagueness in the logline? (a “troubleshooter” what’s that? Sounds like an IT guy). Don’t hide the secret from the logline reader and then the “shoot” portion brings more confusion.
Remember that a logline is mainly for some Hollywood big shot that has millions of dollars in the bank and is waiting for the perfect story to come across his table to read and pump money into for production. Ask yourself, when he reads your logline, will it make him salivate and yell “LET ME SEE THE SCRIPT!” or will it make him scratch his head and go back to his lunch? On a lesser scale, would telling your best friend what a movie is about in that logline sentence make them want to rush to the theater? Take the mystery out of the logline and be enticing and direct. Just my two cents.
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Sounds intriguing. I believe the "than" is a typo and it's supposed to be "that"? I feel like there should be a conflict or predicament in the logline at the end. Old Black Man meets Record player that makes him enjoy life the way they used to...then what? ?I think you put this in your head at the eRead more
Sounds intriguing. I believe the “than” is a typo and it’s supposed to be “that”? I feel like there should be a conflict or predicament in the logline at the end. Old Black Man meets Record player that makes him enjoy life the way they used to…then what? ?I think you put this in your head at the end of the logline “…and complications arise when…” and explain it. Then you can rework your logline to make it more complete.
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