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Trish Humphries a self-absorbed news reporter who just moved to New York finally gets her own talk show. She thinks it’s in a big network, but it’s really just public access. Now she has to learn how to work with her new team and balance her open relationship with her three boyfriends while pursuing her dream to be famous.
At 59 words, its too long for a logline. A logline has to be under 50 words and if its under 25 words thats much better. Unless you are writing a biopic about a public figure, don't put your character name in the logline. The fact that she has just moved and the MCs perception of big network but actRead more
At 59 words, its too long for a logline. A logline has to be under 50 words and if its under 25 words thats much better.
Unless you are writing a biopic about a public figure, don’t put your character name in the logline. The fact that she has just moved and the MCs perception of big network but actually its public access, and the three boyfriends, are unnecessary. The logline is to hook us, make us want to watch, give us what is unique about your story, give us the tone, genre of the story and the journey we are about to go on.
I can’t work out what is unique about your story, or why I’d want to watch.
Is this for TV or a movie?
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Sorry. Copernicus' Secret is supposed to be the title, but not sure how your supposed to format logline + title in the "post logline" box.
Sorry. Copernicus’ Secret is supposed to be the title, but not sure how your supposed to format logline + title in the “post logline” box.
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Love it. Very clear, who the protagonist is, goal and the stakes. I'd watch.
Love it. Very clear, who the protagonist is, goal and the stakes. I’d watch.
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