Thank you all, am going to try to switch it around, again. Is the previous version the one I should fix and dump this new one?

“A young couple thinks that bickering is what threatens their marriage, until an international gang commits a violent takeover of America, forcing them to work together in order to escape, but they get caught instead!”

For this story, “Luck of the Irish,” she worked as a nurse’s aid for dying woman and once patient died there was a short amount of time to sell the woman’s car before family came looking for it. Listed it on the internet and the man who came to buy it asked her to go inside to get a piece of paper to write a bill of sale. She hears her little daughter scream and runs back outside, the man was really there to kidnap the child. Because they are not here legally AND also have run from the law several times already, they can’t call the police. Instead they leave, as they were already packed to go. (was going to sell car and then hit the road.)

The antagonist is unnamed and there for a very short time, the story is? 30 mins (at most) and the family of the character has made her do fake pregnancy scams, etc.