1. Posted: March 8, 2019In:

    After learning that their recently deceased father did not make a will regarding his opulent mansion, the three siblings who distanced themselves from their hot- tempered father begin a heated dispute over the inheritance, but a revelation that that their father bequeathed the estate to his unknown illegitimate daughter he fathered with a former prostitute turn their lives upside down, relationships fall apart as betrayal, greed and desperation ensue.

    Redshoes Penpusher

    I would suggest: "When three estranged siblings learn their late father has left his substantial estate to his secret illegitimate daughter, they must...?? Maybe, work together to get their just deserts; which might be different than they had imagined.

    I would suggest: “When three estranged siblings learn their late father has left his substantial estate to his secret illegitimate daughter, they must…?? Maybe, work together to get their just deserts; which might be different than they had imagined.

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  2. Posted: March 7, 2019In:

    In order to save two missing girls, a cop must win a game of wits with the criminal who knows where they are or risk losing the girls to a dark demise. (Psychological Horror)

    Redshoes Penpusher

    I would suggest the 'game of wits' and the 'dark demise' need to be spelled out.

    I would suggest the ‘game of wits’ and the ‘dark demise’ need to be spelled out.

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