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  1. Posted: May 11, 2018In: SciFi

    Upon successful human cloning, the mother and the Military of USA destroy the Earth, to redefine ?Mankind? and ?Humanity? on a recreated Earth.

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    Added an answer on May 11, 2018 at 8:01 pm

    Hi there!Greetings from India!This logline was originally created for me by Foxtrot25, during October 2017. Later I worked on the story, 'Loving Nymph', (which was just some 170 pages approximately), and now that story is a part of a much bigger one, "Business With The Devil' (760 pages). I've usedRead more

    Hi there!

    Greetings from India!

    This logline was originally created for me by Foxtrot25, during October 2017. Later I worked on the story, ‘Loving Nymph’, (which was just some 170 pages approximately), and now that story is a part of a much bigger one, “Business With The Devil’ (760 pages). I’ve used the same logline for BWTD. The conversation with Foxtrot25 went on like this:ME:-
    ‘Thank you Foxtrot25 for helping me out.

    I thought you might want to have a look at the story? It?s not illegal to share link to the story on logline.it You?re many who?ve helped me out. Mind me sharing a link here in comment/message?

    Rhea’

    FOXTROT25:-
    ‘I don?t think it?s illegal to post the link here. Try it, see if you get valuable feedback from someone, just make sure your work is protected.

    Gl.’

    on October 26, 2017.

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    I also remember someone suggesting me there to keep a track of the loglines which were meant to be for the same story, in a way that I don’t post too many loglines like confusing the tread.

    I thought I might include here the 2 page synopsis for ‘Business With The Devil’?

    Here it is:-

    NIKITA MAJILA

    BUSINESS WITH THE DEVIL

    rheasolaris@gmail.com

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    NOTE: I?m pitching a STORY.

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    INTRODUCTION: The story is inspired by true events.

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    THE SPECS:

      1. TITLE: BUSINESS WITH THE DEVIL ? A KILLER?S LOVE STORY

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      1. FORMAT: MOVIE

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      1. GENRE: Hardcore Sci-Fi

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      1. NUTSHELL: THE WOLVERINE meets

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    ?????????????????????? The Curious Case Of Benjamin Button

      1. LOGLINE: A BIOLOGICALLY ENHANCED MOTHER MUST FIGHT FOR THE SOCIAL ACCEPTANCE OF HER CLONED CHILDREN BEFORE HER OWN BROTHER TAKES THEM AWAY FROM HER.

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      1. SETTING: 21ST CENTURY, INDIA?and Military of USA

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    THE STORY

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    Beautiful Rose must find a way thru life on Earth because the origin would then go missing otherwise. The same fortunate Ryan Lochte finds a way thru the consequences following like he can. He consumes LSD which was prescribed for him for recovery from psychological, mental and physical pain he chose to go thru. The drug makes him realize his true identity, together with self-realization and self-actualization. The aliens are only bloodless bodies, 100 aliens travel to Earth and contact Military of USA where Officer Nick and Rose communicate with them and later these reveal that the bodies ?evaporated? like only acid was left from the 100 alien bodies, acid which we need to recreate the Earth. The one who had been communicating with the Military said that his own human clone was born already, and that he?s Ryan Lochte, US Olympic swimmer. He left two documents for him before his body evaporated, Info and Mannual. Upon having this knowledge Ryan would become Lord Shiva, the destroyer God. These 100 were clones of the same one God ? Lord Shiva. On his planet, which can be called ?Mirror World?, they had cloning on high. In the beginning, a woman clone of the same God was created, and was killed ? she was Rose. The God studied the genes for 5,000 years and then destroyed the planet, together with thousands of trillions of clones on the planet. In Hell, these were punished by giant biological machines, with which the God created souls of girls, these were clone children of Rose. Meanwhile, Rose was working together with the Military of USA, who are planning to end the Earth, to recreate Earth. Together they plan to make a blast at CERN, for which they let the secret information out to terrorists, who are going to destroy the Earth, bit by bit and then finally, totally. Rose has clone children, and is planning many more. She can grow lost limbs for which she has a set stretagy to follow.

    Rose gets to find offense very easily, and the way she was brought up, she would deny anything which comes her way and would reply with positivity instead. Then onwards, once she gets to find her tattoos which represent Ryan Lochte and her son with him, Neero, she would forgive everyone, being a religious one, someone who?s been touched by Christ. The belief part, is her conscience, and Humanity and Mankind would continue with her existence among many men, we, who survived the salvation and recreated the Earth for betterment of life. The purpose was met because she is a fertile woman. The Military builds Green Giant ? The Ship, which can be operated using two software, 1, Lady Machine and 2, Man Machine. First Rose built Lady Machine, and later the Military, together standing as one person, built Man Machine. Lady Machine can operate the ship but upon being met with emergencies, she would give up working for possibly anyone. And this fault, led her to give birth to so many clone children, hers as well as those of her lovers?. There?re going to be 8 more twins born with her eggs and her lovers? sperms, and each of these twins, one is a girl and the other is a boy, they are lovers among them two. During 2020, Neero was born, and in the umbilical cord there were Human Roe, together with stemcells, which were derived in a way that one hundred thousand clone girl children can be born, who had Double Helix Ring DNA. There?s Polar Bear Project, which took place before her pregnancy. They hunt a polar bear and the DMT derived from the brain was given to Rose who got pregnant the same night, and on 31st day of conception, the embryo was taken out using vacuum aspiration, the third generation of mixing the stemcells, would be able to grow lost limbs for the veterans, this technology led to cure Cancer.

    The belief part of the story, on Rose?s behalf, was about Christ being her son Neero. Her visions include her religious point of view, and she knows that these 100 aliens were ?religious leaders? of that planet. Science together with Religion, creates, and destroys Mankind. We are being cause, and reason for creation as well as destruction. But God is one of us. And the same matter, gets to find her right when she describes how exactly Neero appeared to her ever since she was 17 years old, and what work the Demon made her do, which can lead Humanity and Mankind to this so severe destination, in the sense that science and religion, together, can destroy the planet Earth, and she can create another kind of world, together with all potent guys, who were made to survive. She consumes the DMT from her brother?s brain, who, according to the theory she wrote, is Satan himself, the DMT makes her colors of eyes, skin and hair change to blue, white and maroon successively. The quest is just the beginning ? she left her parents? home where her brother was living, too. Together with Lucky, she found a better way to live life, while her child Sara was born thru her with normal delivery. Later she asked Tiger to help her get rid of the knowledge which has been bothering her thru out the years, the fact that she can kill using only her brain, and would, if she has to ? in order to protect her family and child. The same technique with which she can kill, can give life also. The positivity she had been talking about, led her to the right kind of crowd in this world, and she calls the potent guys her brothers. Tiger unveils her true identity to the entire world and she can go unnoticed in her brain but not by the world. Upon this recognition, she wrote this story, which was meant to describe her schizophrenic situation, and upon completion, there?s desctruction of our Earth. When she is in her right senses, she realizes that she is half asleep in her senses and can communicate with the Demon Neero, who imposed upon her that she must talk about the situation to Tiger, who would later realize the severity of the situation and can make it availed for betterment of life.

    That’s it! That’s all I’ve got for telling here, at logline.it . The logline was originally written by Foxtrot25. I might just mention it here twice.

    Thanks for the marvellous response, and Thanks for helping me out, here at logline.it. I guess the logline is the most perfect in every way to represent the bigger picture, the bigger story, ‘Business With The Devil’.. Though I thought that BWTD represents a bigger picture, than the ‘Loving Nymph’. And still the best logline I can have for BWTD.

    Regards,

    Rhea 🙂

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  2. Posted: October 26, 2017In: SciFi

    A biologically enhanced mother plans for more clone children, but she must make the world a place where they can survive, so she unleashes her ability to kill using only her brain, kills her brother.

    RheaSolaris Logliner
    Added an answer on October 26, 2017 at 3:07 am

    Thank you Foxtrot25 for helping me out. I thought you might want to have a look at the story? It's not illegal to share link to the story on logline.it You're many who've helped me out. Mind me sharing a link here in comment/message? Rhea

    Thank you Foxtrot25 for helping me out.

    I thought you might want to have a look at the story? It’s not illegal to share link to the story on logline.it You’re many who’ve helped me out. Mind me sharing a link here in comment/message?

    Rhea

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  3. Posted: October 24, 2017In: Thriller

    A mother to two clone children plans for more clone children, but she must make the world a place where they can survive, so she unleashes her ability to kill using only her brain, founding a world of potent and fertile.

    RheaSolaris Logliner
    Added an answer on October 26, 2017 at 2:10 am

    A biologically enhanced mother plans for more clone children, but she must make the world a place where they can survive, so she unleashes her ability to kill using only her brain, kills her brother.

    A biologically enhanced mother plans for more clone children, but she must make the world a place where they can survive, so she unleashes her ability to kill using only her brain, kills her brother.

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