1. Posted: August 6, 2017In:

    A workaholic midwife becomes pregnant with twins after a drunken one night stand and with the help of her friends adjusts to her new life as a mother.

    Roberto Alto Logliner

    This sounds like a situation, and no more. Why twins? Does the one night stand figure into the story later? The ending is predictable - adjusting ones life to be a mother because you are pregnant.

    This sounds like a situation, and no more. Why twins? Does the one night stand figure into the story later? The ending is predictable – adjusting ones life to be a mother because you are pregnant.

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  2. Posted: August 26, 2017In:

    A young girl runs away from her sharecropping life to pursue her dream of becoming a blues legend.

    Roberto Alto Logliner

    This is a situation description, like, a man goes to college, or, mom goes to the neighbor's house. Just a situation. Do a parallel for the Wizard of Oz. This would produce something like, "a girl travels down a yellow brick road." I think you would agree that this would not suffice as a log line foRead more

    This is a situation description, like, a man goes to college, or, mom goes to the neighbor’s house. Just a situation. Do a parallel for the Wizard of Oz. This would produce something like, “a girl travels down a yellow brick road.” I think you would agree that this would not suffice as a log line for that classic movie? So much more happening, correct?

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  3. Posted: August 26, 2017In:

    A moody princess meets two men at the edge of forest and takes advantage of their good nature, but one of the men take something else from her.

    Roberto Alto Logliner

    Is this a serious request?

    Is this a serious request?

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