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After years of forced thievery under his older brother, a repentant young burglar sets out to make amends with the people he’s wronged.
This sounds promising. It would be more powerful if there was an actual event the triggered it all - not just the brother saying "okay, tired of this..." Maybe it is after an incident that has a direct effect a family losing all their property or something greater. ?"When two?crooks steal their tentRead more
This sounds promising. It would be more powerful if there was an actual event the triggered it all – not just the brother saying “okay, tired of this…” Maybe it is after an incident that has a direct effect a family losing all their property or something greater. ?”When two?crooks steal their tenth?car, causing a family to unexpectedly lose their home, the guilt-ridden younger brother decides to start a taxi service that offers free rides to the needy.” The incident is the mark – it makes everything turn. You can call the screenplay: The Tenth Car.
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Do you mean Hollywood icons? Are these guys celebrity types who accidentally killed the female (or male) escort they hired for an event? Or sex? You're not setting up a easily understood scenario. Why would an accidental death incite someone, or a group, to go on a crime spree??? Maybe their crazedRead more
Do you mean Hollywood icons? Are these guys celebrity types who accidentally killed the female (or male) escort they hired for an event? Or sex? You’re not setting up a easily understood scenario. Why would an accidental death incite someone, or a group, to go on a crime spree??? Maybe their crazed state (were they drugged out) led them to irrational behavior as they thought they were hiding the accident, but they were creating more problems and unknowingly engaging in criminal activity.
See lessAfter being dumped a woman must survive in the city without her sugar daddy boyfriend and avoid the millennial fate, moving home with her parents.
Good log lines have a sense of irony - what you are describing sound like everyday life. Ho hum. Irony in Tootsie was, a man who is not nice to women (he uses them) has to dress up like a woman to get a job. Wow! What a turning of the tables. So, maybe there's a relationship between the sugar daddyRead more
Good log lines have a sense of irony – what you are describing sound like everyday life. Ho hum. Irony in Tootsie was, a man who is not nice to women (he uses them) has to dress up like a woman to get a job. Wow! What a turning of the tables. So, maybe there’s a relationship between the sugar daddy and his parents. Maybe it’s her dad’s ex-business partner, and the dad has no idea this was going on?
When a sugar daddy dumps his girlfriend, a daughter of an ex-business partner, the high school drop-out who loved living the rich life?returns to?real daddy and begins to plan?a way to?regain her glamorous lifestyle when he reveals that his ex-business partner stole all his money, money she now considers rightfully hers!
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