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Does this sound interesting/openable or too similar to a Christmas carol?
I think you could even do: ?"A regretful, embittered taxi driver must imitate Scrooge and visit her own past, present and future on the eve of her son's wedding to try to help him ?avoid repeating?her mistakes"
I think you could even do: ?”A regretful, embittered taxi driver must imitate Scrooge and visit her own past, present and future on the eve of her son’s wedding to try to help him ?avoid repeating?her mistakes”
See lessDoes this sound interesting/openable or too similar to a Christmas carol?
I see no problem with being like Dickens (would that I could be!), but I would modify the phrasing: On the eve of her son's wedding, a regretful, embittered taxi driver must visit her own past, present and future to help?him avoid repeating?her mistakes. Russell
I see no problem with being like Dickens (would that I could be!), but I would modify the phrasing:
On the eve of her son’s wedding, a regretful, embittered taxi driver must visit her own past, present and future to help?him avoid repeating?her mistakes.
Russell
See lessWhen a graffiti outbreak in a small town corresponds with recent child abductions in the county, a nerdy teenage boy has to crack the codes to save the children and become the town hero.
Well I certainly learnt from this example. My take would be: When a nerdy teenager's sister becomes another abductee, he must first crack the clues ?in a graffiti outbreak to attempt a rescue.
Well I certainly learnt from this example. My take would be:
When a nerdy teenager’s sister becomes another abductee, he must first crack the clues ?in a graffiti outbreak to attempt a rescue.
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