1. Posted: January 13, 2021In:

    A young man must find the reason behind his promiscuity before it destroys him.

    sabrown Penpusher

    To answer your first three questions, all of those things happen to him in the film. I have been told to get it concise and seems add all of those details will make it longer.

    To answer your first three questions, all of those things happen to him in the film. I have been told to get it concise and seems add all of those details will make it longer.

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  2. Posted: January 13, 2021In:

    A young man must find the reason behind his promiscuity before it destroys him.

    sabrown Penpusher

    I really like your example. lol thank you for the advice and I will work on improving it.

    I really like your example. lol thank you for the advice and I will work on improving it.

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  3. Posted: January 13, 2021In:

    A martriarch fights to keep her family together amid hurtful secrets.

    sabrown Penpusher

    Thanks for the feedback. I will consider everything and come back stronger.

    Thanks for the feedback. I will consider everything and come back stronger.

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