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  1. Posted: March 18, 2022In: Western

    Imprisoned cowboy elephant, Rabab (45), is presented with a 3-day do or die mission – capture a cowgirl vigilante, Sky (20), or his bomb collar will be detonated. But when Sky reveals that the Sheriff who imprisoned Rabab was involved in the genocide of Rabab’s race, Rabab must team up with Sky, take down the Sheriff and his deputies, and remove the bomb collar before his trunk blows off.

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    Hey storydude - hope you are well :) I have made changes to the logline - lemme know what you reckon. It would be a live-action space western - shot in a desert, the elephant would look half man / half elephant. The idea with this is that he is constantly on the hunt for clues as to who murdered hisRead more

    Hey storydude – hope you are well 🙂

    I have made changes to the logline – lemme know what you reckon.

    It would be a live-action space western – shot in a desert, the elephant would look half man / half elephant.

    The idea with this is that he is constantly on the hunt for clues as to who murdered his entire race – this first story finds him in a jail after many failed solo missions – so he’s fairly jaded and can’t stand humans at this point.

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