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  1. Posted: August 5, 2013In: Student Loglines

    After being framed for the murder of his father, a teen boy growing up in the late 1930's finds comfort in the "Red-Ryder" comic strip. In his adventures he struggles to find his father's murderer, and prove his name is clear.

    Samuel Foy
    Added an answer on August 7, 2013 at 8:04 pm

    In relation to the last comment, I don't think the log line means he needs to be living in his own comic strip. I took it to mean more that the kid gets inspired by the hero, and tries to emulate him while trying to clear his Father's name. Could have some good stuff in it. The kid starts dressing uRead more

    In relation to the last comment, I don’t think the log line means he needs to be living in his own comic strip. I took it to mean more that the kid gets inspired by the hero, and tries to emulate him while trying to clear his Father’s name.
    Could have some good stuff in it. The kid starts dressing up, nosing around crime scenes (trusty side kick pet dog?) and unbelievably is able to stumble upon some good evidence.

    Good luck!

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  2. Posted: August 5, 2013In: Student Loglines

    After successful neurosurgery, a monk questions his visions of a transcendent being or whether they're symptoms of mental illness.

    Samuel Foy
    Added an answer on August 7, 2013 at 7:57 pm

    Solid idea. The main thing will be how the visions help him. If it was a detective whose vision were helping him solve cases, he has something at stake if he loses the ability. Obviously your monk isn't doing such a thing - or could he be? No he definitely shouldn't be a monk turned detective, but tRead more

    Solid idea. The main thing will be how the visions help him. If it was a detective whose vision were helping him solve cases, he has something at stake if he loses the ability. Obviously your monk isn’t doing such a thing – or could he be? No he definitely shouldn’t be a monk turned detective, but the visions need to be helping him some sort of way. Or harming him. Either way, there has to be something to lose if he denies himself these images.
    Obviously he doesn’t want to lose his phone connection to the big fella and his mates in the sky, but if his newfound powers are helping his friends and making him a better monk, then you have some stakes.

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