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  1. Posted: December 7, 2020In: Drama

    When he killed himself, he left five letters to five people in his life giving each a special task which he believed would bring them happiness. These are their stories.

    saurin desai Penpusher
    Replied to answer on June 5, 2021 at 12:43 am

    I agree. It would help if we know why he takes his life... a terminal illness might justify it, and if he had lived a long and fulfilling life, his letters would be worth their weight in happiness. But, yes, adding 'The Letters' to my watch list. Thank you, Mike.

    I agree. It would help if we know why he takes his life… a terminal illness might justify it, and if he had lived a long and fulfilling life, his letters would be worth their weight in happiness. But, yes, adding ‘The Letters’ to my watch list. Thank you, Mike.

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  2. Posted: March 1, 2016In: Examples

    When a princess’s sister, the queen, flees after freezing their village with her icy powers, the princess must find her sister to heal the village and rekindle their relationship – Frozen.

    saurin desai Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 4, 2021 at 2:54 am

    Hello Jo. This is my first attempt at a logline review, so I apologize in case I've overstepped. I have a couple of questions that could help me get a better sense of what's going on: 1. Why does the Queen (the antagonist) freeze the village? Is it for fun / cause they won't do what she wants them tRead more

    Hello Jo.

    This is my first attempt at a logline review, so I apologize in case I’ve overstepped.

    I have a couple of questions that could help me get a better sense of what’s going on:

    1. Why does the Queen (the antagonist) freeze the village? Is it for fun / cause they won’t do what she wants them to / to spite her sister or someone else?
    2. Does the sister have any superpowers? Will she be able to fend for herself? How scared is she of her sister?
    3. Does the sister want to rekindle her relationship just so that their village is healed or does she want to mend it for its own sake or are both equally important?

    Thank you

    Disclaimer: I have not seen the film or read the screenplay.

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