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  1. Posted: September 30, 2017In: Drama

    When an Iwi investor whanagungatanga is threatened, he must relinquish his fears at a maximum personal cost and risk to encounter a spiritual revelation that awakens his true identity in God.

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    Added an answer on October 12, 2017 at 8:29 pm

    Hi. I really believe I am getting closer to conquering this logline. I am so appreciative of this review thread. This is a excellent challenge for me to breakthrough and have a logline that I need for the reader to understand.? Otherwise the other alternative would be to give up...?? Nah! I will keeRead more

    Hi.

    I really believe I am getting closer to conquering this logline. I am so appreciative of this review thread. This is a excellent challenge for me to breakthrough and have a logline that I need for the reader to understand.? Otherwise the other alternative would be to give up…?? Nah! I will keep going.!!? Lol

    “After Joshua breakdown he returns to his tribe, where his faith is tested. He must?explore a spiritual life that activates his identity in and through his culture and genealogy.”

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  2. Posted: September 30, 2017In: Drama

    When an Iwi investor whanagungatanga is threatened, he must relinquish his fears at a maximum personal cost and risk to encounter a spiritual revelation that awakens his true identity in God.

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    Added an answer on October 11, 2017 at 6:19 am

    Hi allI think I have gone in and noticed a bad habit of what I have not been doing. That is being specific with my descriptions. I have to admit I was challenged and struggling. So I hope I am getting closer to a logline that carry's the DNA of my story. Here is the new revised version.Joshua ignoraRead more

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    I think I have gone in and noticed a bad habit of what I have not been doing. That is being specific with my descriptions. I have to admit I was challenged and struggling. So I hope I am getting closer to a logline that carry’s the DNA of my story. Here is the new revised version.

    Joshua ignorance?challenges his faith when he submits his pride to God, at a personal cost and risk, he must experience this spiritual journey to awaken his identity in God.

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  3. Posted: September 30, 2017In: Drama

    When an Iwi investor whanagungatanga is threatened, he must relinquish his fears at a maximum personal cost and risk to encounter a spiritual revelation that awakens his true identity in God.

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    Added an answer on September 30, 2017 at 6:12 pm

    Hi Craig. Thank you for your response. Whanagungatanga means in our Maori culture, a close connection between people; kinship. This is a story about?internal conflict of Ti kanga Maori and Christianity and the discover of a true identity in God . I am a faith based creative writer and producer. I amRead more

    Hi Craig.

    Thank you for your response.

    Whanagungatanga means in our Maori culture, a close connection between people; kinship. This is a story about?internal conflict of Ti kanga Maori and Christianity and the discover of a true identity in God . I am a faith based creative writer and producer. I am struggling so I appreciate your review.? I have rewritten the logline.

    When a close connection between his Maori?culture and Christianity?is threatened, He?must relinquish his pride and self motivation at a maximum personal cost?and risk to?encounter?a spiritual revelation that awakens his?true identity with God.

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