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  1. Posted: February 1, 2017In: Drama

    ?A young mother?s life descends into chaos, when her husband talks her into helping him complete a job, as a contract killer, assassinating drug dealers, in the Philippines, but when a job goes wrong, and as a result, her husband is killed, and her children kidnapped, she will stop at nothing to meet revenge and save her kids.? ? SHABU by Judah Ray ?

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    Added an answer on February 6, 2017 at 7:14 am

    It seems the logline is not, at all, portraying the story for what it is. Here is the synopsis, in hopes it clears up the story, and help people understand the logline I am trying to achieve.SHABUSynopsis:Aimee is a young woman, living in a Philippine shantytown, with her husband and two young childRead more

    It seems the logline is not, at all, portraying the story for what it is. Here is the synopsis, in hopes it clears up the story, and help people understand the logline I am trying to achieve.

    SHABU

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    Aimee is a young woman, living in a Philippine shantytown, with her husband and two young children. Her community, wrought with poverty, is in the throws of a terrible drug epidemic, centered around a powerful methamphetamine, known as Shabu. Her husband, Jeff Ryan, a retired American veteran, supports his family by working as a contract killer, assassinating drug dealers.

    When a hit is ordered on a target, that only a woman can get close enough to take out, Jeff Ryan turns to the only woman he knows… his wife. Aimee, disgusted by the things that she sees happening in her community, agrees to perform the hit. After the job is finished, Aimee carries out an unsanctioned hit, taking out a ruthless drug dealer, whom she had repeatedly seen, brutalizing her helpless neighbor. This causes Aimee’s family to become the targets of a powerful criminal organization, bent on revenge, and the only way that she can save them, is to win, what will prove to be, the fight of her life.

    Thank you all for your help and inspiration. I am listening to everyone’s input and trying to apply it to the logline.
    Judah Ray

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  2. Posted: February 1, 2017In: SciFi

    ?When a man realizes the creatures, he?s been convinced his whole life weren?t real, are actually trying to take over the world, will he turn against what end up being his own kind, or save his new love, and the rest of the human race?? ? UNKNOWN POWER by Judah Ray ?

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    Added an answer on February 1, 2017 at 10:34 am

    It doesn?t tell what the inciting incident is. The child has visions. It doesn?t tell what the objective goal of the main character is. The objective is to define the human race; I.E., us. It doesn?t tell what?s at stake, why it makes any difference whether anyone believes the main character or not.Read more

    It doesn?t tell what the inciting incident is.
    The child has visions.

    It doesn?t tell what the objective goal of the main character is.
    The objective is to define the human race; I.E., us.

    It doesn?t tell what?s at stake, why it makes any difference whether anyone believes the main character or not.
    What the kid sees will define the human race.

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  3. Posted: September 26, 2015In: Action

    ?After she’s attacked by demons, a teenage amnesiac must discover who or what she is, if she?s to defeat the evil horde that has targeted her.? — Fallen Angel–

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    Added an answer on February 1, 2017 at 10:17 am

    I really like this idea. It can go so many great ways, I would be excited to rea dit, based just off this logline. Good work. I applaud you.

    I really like this idea. It can go so many great ways, I would be excited to rea dit, based just off this logline. Good work. I applaud you.

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