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  1. Posted: December 7, 2015In: Comedy

    A New York-based, coke-addicted DJ who is obsessed with 70s disco sees a mob execution so FBI Witness Protection sticks him in a rural Iowa town.

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    Added an answer on December 10, 2015 at 6:40 am

    Thank you. ?It is before he has had a chance to testify. A small-time club DJ who is obsessed with 70s disco sees a mob execution, so FBI Witness Protection sticks him in a rural Iowa town while he waits for his chance to testify. ?When he helps a young country songwriter create a smash hit song, thRead more

    Thank you. ?It is before he has had a chance to testify.

    A small-time club DJ who is obsessed with 70s disco sees a mob execution, so FBI Witness Protection sticks him in a rural Iowa town while he waits for his chance to testify. ?When he helps a young country songwriter create a smash hit song, the fame could become deadly for them both…

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  2. Posted: December 6, 2015In: Thriller

    A ‘Thrill-Thirsty’ son learns that ‘Knowledge is a double-edged sword’ and promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Inspiring-Mentor, his Dad (a celebrated Police-Officer!).

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    Added an answer on December 10, 2015 at 6:34 am

    Ok, now tell me in half as many words.

    Ok, now tell me in half as many words.

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  3. Posted: December 6, 2015In: Thriller

    A ‘Thrill-Thirsty’ son learns that ‘Knowledge is a double-edged sword’ and promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Inspiring-Mentor, his Dad (a celebrated Police-Officer!).

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    Added an answer on December 7, 2015 at 2:52 pm

    i think we need a lit bit more of the external plot in the logline. ?Here it just sounds like an introspective journey...who is the enemy he will have to face to wield this knowledge in order to win?

    i think we need a lit bit more of the external plot in the logline. ?Here it just sounds like an introspective journey…who is the enemy he will have to face to wield this knowledge in order to win?

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