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Resentful towards his prey and questioning his abilities ever since the death of his protege, a hunter pursues a family protecting a monster they believe to be their deceased matriarch.
As it stands I am much more interested in the family who believes a monster is their reincarnated grandmother. Is the man a game hunter? Why does he go after the family? There are two plots happening in this logline and they are currently not jiving together.
As it stands I am much more interested in the family who believes a monster is their reincarnated grandmother. Is the man a game hunter? Why does he go after the family? There are two plots happening in this logline and they are currently not jiving together.
See lessA renowned? but snobby food critic finds himself trapped in a Michelin star restaurant after a snowstorm with the volatile French chef whose previous establishment closed down due to a scathing review he wrote.
I like the premise! It has the conflict and comedic potential. I agree with the comments about it needing a hint about what kind of comedy it is. Is it going to be dark or light hearted? The script can keep us guessing, but the logline should tell us exactly what we are getting. Keep at it!
I like the premise! It has the conflict and comedic potential. I agree with the comments about it needing a hint about what kind of comedy it is. Is it going to be dark or light hearted? The script can keep us guessing, but the logline should tell us exactly what we are getting. Keep at it!
See lessAfter starting a commune in the aftermath of Woodstock, a group of hippies has to resort to stealing from a hermit chicken farmer. All goes well until they kill his favorite hen… Now it?s his time to kill.
A hilarious premise! I agree with the first comment about the clarifying the main character. Also, just a thought, since they are hippies maybe they kidnap the chicken thinking they are ?saving? it from being dinner. Then the farmer goes Rambo on their asses. Honestly though, this made me cluck in aRead more
A hilarious premise! I agree with the first comment about the clarifying the main character. Also, just a thought, since they are hippies maybe they kidnap the chicken thinking they are ?saving? it from being dinner. Then the farmer goes Rambo on their asses. Honestly though, this made me cluck in amusement! Keep it up!
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