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When a neglected housewife discovers that the nest will be empty sooner than she had planned, she follows her daughter to the beach for the summer in an effort to save their last few months together, quickly realizing she has a lot to learn about their relationship, her marriage and herself.
I like the idea, personally, and recent movies like The Meddler and Hello, My Name is Doris have made me feel like we could definitely be entertained watching older women at this stage of their life. I ?suppose I could agree with the comment about raising the stakes. ?Are secrets revealed, does he dRead more
I like the idea, personally, and recent movies like The Meddler and Hello, My Name is Doris have made me feel like we could definitely be entertained watching older women at this stage of their life.
I ?suppose I could agree with the comment about raising the stakes. ?Are secrets revealed, does he daughter almost reject her, does something that gets newly awakened on this trip threaten her marriage, etc.
See less“When two brothers feud over having to play with each other, one enters a cheat code into their video game, and the two are sucked into a game world, where they must battle bosses, and beat levels, to win, or be stuck in the game world forever.” – Cheat Code Kids – by Judah Ray
The idea of getting sucked into a video game is a marketable idea, I think for kids/families. I think the logline shows a lot of the first 10 pages, the setup. ?What if you just started at: "Two argumentative brothers, become trapped in a video game...." ?I don't know if argumentative is the right aRead more
The idea of getting sucked into a video game is a marketable idea, I think for kids/families.
I think the logline shows a lot of the first 10 pages, the setup. ?What if you just started at:
“Two argumentative brothers, become trapped in a video game….” ?I don’t know if argumentative is the right adjective to show the conflict or personalities of your MC’s of course. ?Maybe you want to get across that they are opposites and state their qualities?
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