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    I thought about replacing the ‘Romeo and Juliet’ play with a self-written play. “When he meets an exchange student, a socially awkward nerd joins the university play to win the lead role and have his first kiss ever with his crush before she returns to her home country.”

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    Your logline is very good in that it follows the rules When he meets an exchange student- Major event a socially awkward nerd - Hero Tries to win the lead role in the university play in order to have his first kiss with her before she goes away - Main Action But the best way to find the logline forRead more

    Your logline is very good in that it follows the rules

    When he meets an exchange student- Major event

    a socially awkward nerd – Hero
    Tries to win the lead role in the university play in order to have his first kiss with her before she goes away – Main Action
    But the best way to find the logline for your use is one that makes you clear on what is in the hero’s way.

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    Mahi doesn’t return to the college after her summer internship and everyone blames her classmate Abhinav who used to stalk her for her drop out, so guilt ridden Abhinav takes a journey to convince Mahi not to drop out because of him, but in this journey he discovers darker and shocking secrets of Mahi.

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    Rather than using names use an adjective to define the protagonist that adds to the difficulty of reaching the goal.Hope it Helps

    Rather than using names use an adjective to define the protagonist that adds to the difficulty of reaching the goal.
    Hope it Helps

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