1. Posted: December 10, 2021In:

    When she gets the approval for making her first film on the script she has stolen or adapted from the pages of a shredded diary from a dilapidated library, she finds out that whoever from the cast and crew finishes reading it dies mysteriously in the same manner as in the script and diary. The script is already circulated online to all and whoever reads the first line could not put it down until finishes it.

    songo marcel Penpusher

    What's the protagonist struggle? And what's at stake? Making the Idea mor shorter will be better. But overall I am already impatient to read your development. Contact me mutual help.

    What’s the protagonist struggle? And what’s at stake? Making the Idea mor shorter will be better. But overall I am already impatient to read your development. Contact me mutual help.

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  2. Posted: December 10, 2021In:

    A middle aged outcast becomes determined to seek revenge against his abusive wife as a masked vigilante armed with a robotic pistol.

    songo marcel Penpusher

    Who is the protagonist? Him or his wife? What's at stake?

    Who is the protagonist? Him or his wife?
    What’s at stake?

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  3. Posted: December 11, 2021In:

    A reluctant psychic has a near death experience and learns that karmic strands will continue to hold her and everyone she knows trapped in the same life experiences for eternity unless she can overcome her narcissistic mother’s attempts to keep her powerless and is willing to use her abilities to see the past, present and future to finally free everyone’s souls.

    songo marcel Penpusher

    Great idea but I think you need to simplify your logline so that it can easily be understood by the public. It's a little bit complex and hard to buy in from the first look.

    Great idea but I think you need to simplify your logline so that it can easily be understood by the public. It’s a little bit complex and hard to buy in from the first look.

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