1. Posted: September 7, 2021In:

    When he reincarnates as himself in Stockholm 2021, August Strindberg realizes he has to learn screenwriting at Story on Gotland to make a living -and there, falling in love with his classmate Siri – a happily married liberated feminist that mocks him for his fossil values and ideas, must revaluate himself and his view upon the world.

    Sonja Penpusher

    Hahaha, amazing!

    Hahaha, amazing!

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2021In:

    When uncovering the magical formula to more sales, a greedy telemarketer pursues to climb the capitalist ladder to upgrade his life-situation and impress his girlfriend.

    Sonja Penpusher

    Nice work! I'm not sure if "upgrade his life situation" is needed? Maybe just "a greedy telemarketer starts climbing the cpitalist ladder to impress his girlfriend". I haven't seen this movie, but now I want to, because LaKieth.

    Nice work! I’m not sure if “upgrade his life situation” is needed? Maybe just “a greedy telemarketer starts climbing the cpitalist ladder to impress his girlfriend”.

    I haven’t seen this movie, but now I want to, because LaKieth.

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2021In:

    When a lethal alien is brought on board a spaceship by accident, the crew has to fight for their survival in order to escape

    Sonja Penpusher

    In space no one can hear you in space. Jokes aside, nice logline! I'm thinking to tighten it, maybe you could write "when a lethal alien is found onboard a spaceship" instead? Also, is no one the main character, do we follow the entire crew? Could someone hold the POV for the logline?

    In space no one can hear you in space.

    Jokes aside, nice logline!
    I’m thinking to tighten it, maybe you could write “when a lethal alien is found onboard a spaceship” instead?
    Also, is no one the main character, do we follow the entire crew? Could someone hold the POV for the logline?

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