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  1. Posted: April 13, 2016In: Drama

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    Reginald McGhee Penpusher
    Added an answer on April 14, 2016 at 5:20 am

    I'm not quite sure why a judge wants him convicted. I feel that the logline is a little bit loose. Does he have to come up with the money to finish the to-do list or come up with money to find a lawyer. ?I think those questions got me scratching a little bit. If only the logline was a little bit morRead more

    I’m not quite sure why a judge wants him convicted. I feel that the logline is a little bit loose. Does he have to come up with the money to finish the to-do list or come up with money to find a lawyer. ?I think those questions got me scratching a little bit. If only the logline was a little bit more concise, I wouldn’t mind watching or reading this script.

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