Thanks man, I did my logline again, and I tweaked a few things in my history,
sorry
Sorry I speak Spanish so I will put it as I get it from the translator, anyway I will also put it in Spanish in case there is a grammar error

A millionaire, in an effort to destroy his commercial rival number one, will try to travel in time, and if he is successful he will bring terrible consequences to the world, but a boy with superpowers will try to avoid catastrophe.

Un millonario, en un esfuerzo por destruir a su rival comercial número uno, intentará viajar en el tiempo, y si tiene éxito traerá terribles consecuencias al mundo, pero un chico con superpoderes intentará evitar la catástrofe.,
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The boy is his daughter’s boyfriend, he is the connection with the villain, but I did not find a way to add him to the logline.

I think that as you raised the conflict to me, the story feels a little more original and less forced, thank you friend, if you see an incongruity in the logline, you can leave it below for me again THANKS