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  1. Posted: August 18, 2016In: Drama

    When he receives his visa to the US, a struggling poet returns back home to resolve issues with his overbearing mother and confront the death of his terminally ill sister before departing his country.

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    Added an answer on August 19, 2016 at 2:44 am

    When he receives his visa to the US, a struggling poet returns home, to resolve his issues with his overbearing mother and the death of his terminally ill sister. There he grows and is able to write one of his best poems. (how's this?

    When he receives his visa to the US, a struggling poet returns home, to resolve his issues with his overbearing mother and the death of his terminally ill sister. There he grows and is able to write one of his best poems. (how’s this?

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  2. Posted: August 17, 2016In: War

    A Russian Orthodox farmer torches his home and leaves with his dog hours before Operation Barbarossa and the Nazis invade Russia.

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    Added an answer on August 18, 2016 at 12:28 am

    I like it but maybe change to this: A Russian Orthodox farmer torches his home and leaves with his dog hours before the Nazis invade Russia. Quicker and easier as I've never heard of OPERATION BARBAROSSA.

    I like it but maybe change to this:

    A Russian Orthodox farmer torches his home and leaves with his dog hours before the Nazis invade Russia.

    Quicker and easier as I’ve never heard of OPERATION BARBAROSSA.

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