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  1. Posted: August 11, 2016In: Crime

    When a high school kid suspects his father is responsible for a series of grisly prostitute murders, he teams up with a plucky young call girl to positively identify and stop the murderer.

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    Added an answer on August 14, 2016 at 1:17 pm

    A high school age boy comes to suspects his father is responsible for a recent series of grisly prostitute killings. Together with a plucky young call girl, he?teams up working to find the truth and stop further killings.Seems better, what do you think?

    A high school age boy comes to suspects his father is responsible for a recent series of grisly prostitute killings. Together with a plucky young call girl, he?teams up working to find the truth and stop further killings.

    Seems better, what do you think?

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  2. Posted: August 14, 2016In: Family

    A civil engineer saved a worker life during casting a Dam, but he slipped inside the reinforcement cage and trapped there. With walkie-talkie and 45 minutes the Civil Engineer have to clarify his care to his family and friends.

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    Need to clarify things, fix the grammar and make the story more clear. He saves another work and now With walkie-talkie and 45 minutes the Civil Engineer have to clarify his care to his family and friends??? Why?

    Need to clarify things, fix the grammar and make the story more clear. He saves another work and now With walkie-talkie and 45 minutes the Civil Engineer have to clarify his care to his family and friends??? Why?

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  3. Posted: August 12, 2016In: Drama

    Relationship between the group of friends change as they take trip to Vegas.

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    Added an answer on August 14, 2016 at 12:53 pm

    It is not bad but you need more as to how it changes, why vegas? Remind me of:Oil and Vinegar (1987) After John Hughes?s death in 2009, details on a lost project of his surfaced in the comments section of aVanity Fair piece about his life. Filmmaker Alan Metter, who directed Rodney Dangerfield?s BacRead more

    It is not bad but you need more as to how it changes, why vegas? Remind me of:Oil and Vinegar (1987)
    After John Hughes?s death in 2009, details on a lost project of his surfaced in the comments section of aVanity Fair piece about his life. Filmmaker Alan Metter, who directed Rodney Dangerfield?s Back to School, posted to describe a time that he passed up directing a movie written by John Hughes:

    ?John Hughes and I had the same agent. One day he called and sent over a script John had written and wanted me to direct (it was during the period when there were two John Hughes films being made each year, one he directed and the other he wrote and produced). It was about a guy (Mathew Broderick?) driving across the country on the way to his wedding. He picks up a girl hitchhiking (Molly Ringwald?) and they wind up in a moral dilemma, stranded in a motel room in the middle of nowhere, talking all night about every single thing that?s important to anyone coming of age. Like Breakfast Club it was a magnificent dialogue piece ? a cinematic play. I turned it down because no matter who directed John?s annual ?B? film, it was a John Hughes film. A year earlier my movie, Back To School, had opened the same weekend as Ferris Bueller and beat it at the box office. I didn?t want to take a back seat to John Hughes now. So this great John Hughes movie never got made. And I was never offered a script this good again. I never even got to meet the man. As career moves go, this was the greatest mistake of my life. Maybe someone will dig it up and be smart enough to make one last John Hughes film.? ? Filmmaker Alan Metter, 2009.

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