1. Posted: July 20, 2020In:

    Ramona, an introverted high school girl, unknowingly helps a disguised magical spirit, and in return is awakened to the inevitable destructive fate of her world. Ramona must flee her seemingly protected, privileged city and upbringing, to journey through an impoverished but enchanting land to reach the world’s one true saviour, who is to be found on top of a distant mountain.

    Stardustfortheearthlings Penpusher

    Thank you all for the feedback. It is very much appreciated. I have made some adjustments. Let me know what you think... When a magical spirit reveals the world’s destructive fate, an introverted high school girl must flee her privileged upbringing and journey through an impoverished land to find aRead more

    Thank you all for the feedback. It is very much appreciated. I have made some adjustments. Let me know what you think…

    When a magical spirit reveals the world’s destructive fate, an introverted high school girl must flee her privileged upbringing and journey through an impoverished land to find a saviour, which she later learns is actually herself, and confront the powerful government of the city before the world collapses beneath her feet.

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  2. Posted: July 3, 2020In:

    The world is about to be destroyed by none other than an ordinary human, and the only one who knows about it is an unwillingly chosen fish.

    Stardustfortheearthlings Penpusher

    Thanks so much for the advice. I will make some changes to see if it works more. There is definitely and environmental message, do you think it comes across in the logline well/interestingly enough?

    Thanks so much for the advice. I will make some changes to see if it works more. There is definitely and environmental message, do you think it comes across in the logline well/interestingly enough?

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