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3RD DRAFT…..The idyllic life of an adolescent surfer drastically changes when his family moves to pre-revolution Tehran, an American melting pot submerged in an alien culture where certain realities are but an illusion.
The idyllic life of a SoCal adolescent is upended when his family migrates to pre-revolution Tehran where his westernized coming of age conflicts with a peculiar culture and an American melting pot of illusionary realities.
The idyllic life of a SoCal adolescent is upended when his family migrates to pre-revolution Tehran where his westernized coming of age conflicts with a peculiar culture and an American melting pot of illusionary realities.
See less3RD DRAFT…..The idyllic life of an adolescent surfer drastically changes when his family moves to pre-revolution Tehran, an American melting pot submerged in an alien culture where certain realities are but an illusion.
The idyllic life of a SoCal adolescent is upended when his family migrates to pre-revolution Tehran where his westernized coming of age conflicts with a peculiar culture and an American melting pot of illusionary realities.
The idyllic life of a SoCal adolescent is upended when his family migrates to pre-revolution Tehran where his westernized coming of age conflicts with a peculiar culture and an American melting pot of illusionary realities.
See less3RD DRAFT…..The idyllic life of an adolescent surfer drastically changes when his family moves to pre-revolution Tehran, an American melting pot submerged in an alien culture where certain realities are but an illusion.
As I re-read this, I'm prompted to add a little and shift the wording around. While it gives me a better sense of direction as to where my story needs to go, I'm certain I have a longer way to go with just the logline alone. This exercise is incredibly helpful and prompts more rewrites on the storyRead more
As I re-read this, I’m prompted to add a little and shift the wording around. While it gives me a better sense of direction as to where my story needs to go, I’m certain I have a longer way to go with just the logline alone. This exercise is incredibly helpful and prompts more rewrites on the story that ?I’ve come up with so far. Thank you for continuing to help me along.
The real meat of the story revolves around the effects of ?fast paced westernization on a society that was ill prepared to absorb. I’m most mindful of accurate portrayals as opposed to making a political statements. ?Early 70s Iran was an obscure but significant window in history.
Anyway, here goes another stab. Hopefully I’m getting closer.
Thanks……
The idyllic life of a SoCal adolescent is upended when his family relocates to pre-revolution Tehran, he faces coming of age struggles within a foreign culture and an American melting pot whose certain realities are but an illusion.
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