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When a persistent novice realtor discovers her condescending boss is bankrolling his fancy lifestyle using client escrow funds, she hires an investigator to dig deeper, but he catches on and hires a hit-man to silence her.
Hi Richiev, Nicely done, that's a great way to look at it. I had not thought of that angle; it works! thank you! 'Steeldownunder
Hi Richiev,
See lessNicely done, that’s a great way to look at it. I had not thought of that angle; it works! thank you! ‘Steeldownunder
A righteous but gullible whistle-blower must obtain evidence her intimidating boss is a murderous monster before he catches on and takes sadistic steps to silence her for good.
Hello Darkhorse, thanks for your insightful feedback. I am going to revise my longline, it seems I have used my intended mid point rather than the inciting incident for my longline. Perhaps this novice realtor discovers her boss's fancy lifestyle is bankrolled using clients money held in escrow so sRead more
Hello Darkhorse, thanks for your insightful feedback. I am going to revise my longline, it seems I have used my intended mid point rather than the inciting incident for my longline. Perhaps this novice realtor discovers her boss’s fancy lifestyle is bankrolled using clients money held in escrow so she hires a lawyer to investigate but he catches on to her and hires a hitman to kill her. I will revisit this concept and come back. I’m a beginner at this. Thanks again. Steeldownunder.
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