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  1. Posted: February 22, 2018In: SciFi

    Trapped in a simulated loop of Earth’s final year before war ravaged the world, a increasingly pessimistic time traveller-to-be must test an increasingly severe sequence of events before going back in time to save the planet for real.

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    Trapped in a simulated loop of Earth?s final year, a scientist must relive an increasingly strange sequence of events before trying to change history.

    Trapped in a simulated loop of Earth?s final year, a scientist must relive an increasingly strange sequence of events before trying to change history.

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  2. Posted: February 22, 2018In: SciFi

    Trapped in a simulated loop of Earth’s final year before war ravaged the world, a increasingly pessimistic time traveller-to-be must test an increasingly severe sequence of events before going back in time to save the planet for real.

    Steve72 Logliner
    Added an answer on February 23, 2018 at 12:57 am

    get rid of the words "to be" they break the flow

    get rid of the words “to be” they break the flow

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