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When she breaks the law and names herself, a free-spirited cog fights against the local diversity officer in order to convince her town that freedom should not be outlawed –The Dark Age–
I had a minor confusion in the beginning.? You placed a comma after herself, hence the confusion.? Here's what I'd do. When she breaks the law and names herself a free spirited cog, she fights against the local diversity officer in order to convince her town that freedom should not be outlawed. NotiRead more
I had a minor confusion in the beginning.? You placed a comma after herself, hence the confusion.? Here’s what I’d do.
When she breaks the law and names herself a free spirited cog, she fights against the local diversity officer in order to convince her town that freedom should not be outlawed.
Notice that I removed -The Dark Age- because it is not important for the logline.? Something to consider when loglining.
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What kind of android is it?? Does it have special abilities?? Knowledge?? Taught something on how to experiment?? Was it rogue or a government-approved android that was uploaded AI software that went haywire?? Just some ideas.
What kind of android is it?? Does it have special abilities?? Knowledge?? Taught something on how to experiment?? Was it rogue or a government-approved android that was uploaded AI software that went haywire?? Just some ideas.
See lessAdar, an alien assassin, transports to Earth seeking three killers with chameleon abilities who escaped his ship. Adar must find his prey quickly before many of Earth?s inhabitants are slaughtered or live with dishonor.
Nice logline but got several questions. 1.? What makes Adar special?? Any special attributes to identify him? 2.? What can he do to find those chameleon killers?? How can he see them? 3.? What is important about dishonor?? Maybe refer to intergalactic prime directive or laws?
Nice logline but got several questions.
1.? What makes Adar special?? Any special attributes to identify him?
See less2.? What can he do to find those chameleon killers?? How can he see them?
3.? What is important about dishonor?? Maybe refer to intergalactic prime directive or laws?