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A Vegas waitress tripled in size falls for the scientist who accidentally enlarged her, sacrificing newfound showroom stardom to save him when he’s kidnapped by her abusive ex, a blackmailing mobster and a wealthy, widowed former showgirl.
To me this is the classic logline run amuck. Your giving the read way to much to think about making it impossible to see what the stories truly about. In this case, less would truly be more.
To me this is the classic logline run amuck. Your giving the read way to much to think about making it impossible to see what the stories truly about. In this case, less would truly be more.
See lessAfter a handsome ?younger? man of 74 unexpectedly falls for her at their ?wheelchairs only? assisted living center, a bitter, 93-year-old divorcee must battle her own distrust of men, before accepting love and working to thwart the competition.
How about.... 50 years after getting cold feet and leaving her intended at the alter, a head strong, independent woman must deal with her emotions when he's admitted to the same old folks home she currently lives in and starts playing the field. I could see Jane Fonda, Sally fields, Goldie Hawn, youRead more
How about….
50 years after getting cold feet and leaving her intended at the alter, a head strong, independent woman must deal with her emotions when he’s admitted to the same old folks home she currently lives in and starts playing the field.
I could see Jane Fonda, Sally fields, Goldie Hawn, you get the idea, lining up to play this role.
All the male leading mean of the age range would want a call. Jack Nicholson anyone?
I also see this as a comedy with unlimited potential.
See lessAfter a rape victim loses in court from the suspect?s influential family, she emerges as the leader of “broken”, a group of similar cases prepared to bring justice by necessary evil
How about this? After losing in court, a rape victim emerges as the leader of ?Broken?, a group founded on similar cases seeking justice at any cost. Some times loglines tend to get a little "wordy", and the meaning gets lost or confusing.
How about this?
After losing in court, a rape victim emerges as the leader of ?Broken?, a group founded on similar cases seeking justice at any cost.
Some times loglines tend to get a little “wordy”, and the meaning gets lost or confusing.
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