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Searching for a missing girl, two detectives become trapped in a manor filled with a secret society of vampires – and must get out before eaten alive.
INTENTION: To investigate and stop these mysterious killings.OBSTACLE: I'd say the "secret society". (Even if they escape becoming dinner and escape the manor. Who do they trust? How do they get out of this town?)I want to say they get "trapped" in this manor. That it goes a "WICKER MAN" route. ButRead more
INTENTION: To investigate and stop these mysterious killings.
OBSTACLE: I’d say the “secret society”. (Even if they escape becoming dinner and escape the manor. Who do they trust? How do they get out of this town?)
I want to say they get “trapped” in this manor. That it goes a “WICKER MAN” route. But it also has that “CHINATOWN” element – where they begin to uncover more and more about this place.
Also, I want one of the detectives to die very early on so you know the stakes. He’s the first to get eaten ha.
ORIGINAL LOGLINE:
Two detectives investigating a series of brutal murders in New Orleans, become dinner guests at the manor of an aristocratic vampire – and leader of a secret society.
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See lessA couple with a criminal past, try to start again in a cop neighbourhood, but when children start going missing, they suspect their neighbour ? and set out to prove it.
Carved down...A couple with a criminal past, try to start again in a cop neighbourhood, but begin to suspect their cop neighbour is a serial killer.I made the cop a serial killer to make it more intense.Chopped off "newlywed".Why a cop neighbourhood? Perhaps they're running from something. Perhaps tRead more
Carved down…
A couple with a criminal past, try to start again in a cop neighbourhood, but begin to suspect their cop neighbour is a serial killer.
I made the cop a serial killer to make it more intense.
Chopped off “newlywed”.
Why a cop neighbourhood? Perhaps they’re running from something. Perhaps they need to feel protected? I kept thinking the guy had Irish mob connections and the girl was a former drug mule. Both have a stained history and just want to get on with their lives.
Perhaps they have a kid on the way?
NOTE: The original one I put up was this…
A newlywed couple, both with criminal pasts, try to start again, and move to a cop neighbourhood, but begin to suspect their cop neighbour is kidnapping children.
I since used the one above.
See lessA couple with a criminal past, try to start again in a cop neighbourhood, but when children start going missing, they suspect their neighbour ? and set out to prove it.
INTENTION: Trying to start again. A fresh slate. OBSTACLE: Their criminal pasts. Surrounded by cops. (I suppose they could technically move again. But I think it's about redemption - they want to do the right thing this time. They don't want to keep moving.)
INTENTION: Trying to start again. A fresh slate.
OBSTACLE: Their criminal pasts. Surrounded by cops.
(I suppose they could technically move again. But I think it’s about redemption – they want to do the right thing this time. They don’t want to keep moving.)
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