1. Posted: February 16, 2019In:

    When mutilated animals begin showing up in a small Ohio town and all signs begin to point in an impossible, draconic direction, a new sheriff with something to prove must enlist the help of the high school janitor with a mysterious family past to kill the beast before anyone else gets hurt.

    Jay Cannon (JC) Logliner

    I like the idea, but agree with others that it is too long. Here's a suggestion: When mutilated animals begin showing up in a small Ohio town, a new sheriff with something to prove enlists the help of the high school janitor with a mysterious family past to kill the beast before anyone else gets hurRead more

    I like the idea, but agree with others that it is too long. Here’s a suggestion:

    When mutilated animals begin showing up in a small Ohio town, a new sheriff with something to prove enlists the help of the high school janitor with a mysterious family past to kill the beast before anyone else gets hurt.

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  2. Posted: July 12, 2018In:

    Julia a high school girl, learns that her younger sister has a bowel syndrome disorder and should undergo surgery as soon as possible. She decides to go to Texas with her two friends. But in their road trip, they get involved in some adventures.

    Jay Cannon (JC) Logliner

    Tie the road trip to the need for the surgery.? Expand on "some adventures."

    Tie the road trip to the need for the surgery.? Expand on “some adventures.”

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