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A young psychic lives a virtual hermit?s life until he sees his own death, he must try to figure out the events that lead to his death in a hope of preventing them.
The ending is not visceral enough. Can you say what causes the psychic to see his death? How about: A young psychic lives a virtual hermit?s life until [saving a sick girl] causes him to see his own death, he must discover the events that led to his death before time runs out.
The ending is not visceral enough. Can you say what causes the psychic to see his death? How about:
A young psychic lives a virtual hermit?s life until [saving a sick girl] causes him to see his own death, he must discover the events that led to his death before time runs out.
See lessWhen mutilated animals begin showing up in a small Ohio town and all signs begin to point in an impossible, draconic direction, a new sheriff with something to prove must enlist the help of the high school janitor with a mysterious family past to kill the beast before anyone else gets hurt.
I like the idea, but agree with others that it is too long. Here's a suggestion: When mutilated animals begin showing up in a small Ohio town, a new sheriff with something to prove enlists the help of the high school janitor with a mysterious family past to kill the beast before anyone else gets hurRead more
I like the idea, but agree with others that it is too long. Here’s a suggestion:
When mutilated animals begin showing up in a small Ohio town, a new sheriff with something to prove enlists the help of the high school janitor with a mysterious family past to kill the beast before anyone else gets hurt.
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How is it the student just realized something that happened 50 years ago?? Who helped the student realize his mistake?
How is it the student just realized something that happened 50 years ago?? Who helped the student realize his mistake?
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