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An arrogant tattoo artist sets off on a cross country journey to track his missing girlfriend only to unravel memories he is refusing to acknowledge.
For me - the profession is neither here nor there-- the issue is in the vagueness of the complication -- "...only to unravel memories he is refusing to acknowledge...". Without this being specified I don't really know what this is about (the core function of a logline...) other than a dude (and an aRead more
For me – the profession is neither here nor there– the issue is in the vagueness of the complication — “…only to unravel memories he is refusing to acknowledge…”. Without this being specified I don’t really know what this is about (the core function of a logline…) other than a dude (and an arrogant one at that…) trying to track down his (current?) girlfriend… which is kinda ‘blerrr’. Definitely has potential if you can give us more of what the complication is… or put another way — at the moment there is no “Why..?”
Best of luck with it 🙂
See lessCrashed on a faraway planet with retrograde amnesia, a young, ingenious but highly schizophrenic astronaut strives to rebuild her spacecraft while endeavoring to outwit a manipulative, shape-shifting alien whose sole impetus is to repopulate by abusing her as a host.
I kinda like the concept -- has touches of Alien/ The Thing/ Invasion of the body snatches/ even Contact (even Moon..)... Agree with the above that there are some logical issues and perhaps a bit too much going on (at 40 words...) -- you could definitely trim down character description ... "ARead more
I kinda like the concept — has touches of Alien/ The Thing/ Invasion of the body snatches/ even Contact (even Moon..)… Agree with the above that there are some logical issues and perhaps a bit too much going on (at 40 words…) — you could definitely trim down character description …
“A young astronaut, suffering bouts of amnesia, must repair her crashed ship on a desolate planet before a shape-shifting alien uses her as a host to repopulate its world.”
Best of luck with this one 🙂
See lessA mild-mannered but disgruntled teller leads a hostage revolt against his captors during a bank siege in order to get away with the stolen loot for himself.
A re-working of an old idea.
A re-working of an old idea.
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