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  1. Posted: March 8, 2018In: Crime

    When the mentor of ruthless assassin/lone wolf cop is murdered, the assassin/cop bands his team of skilled corrupt cops/best friends together to find the one responsible.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on March 8, 2018 at 12:03 pm

    From the Logline, the ruthless assassin and his corrupt cops buddies do not sound like a very sympathetic hero. Are they the bad guys? if so, then who is the hero? Why did he kill the mentor and what is happening to him? a lot of questions that the Logline does not even start to address.

    From the Logline, the ruthless assassin and his corrupt cops buddies do not sound like a very sympathetic hero.
    Are they the bad guys?
    if so, then who is the hero? Why did he kill the mentor and what is happening to him?
    a lot of questions that the Logline does not even start to address.

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  2. Posted: March 7, 2018In: Horror

    After a pandemic infects most of the world a young woman leads a group of survivors to safety as they are hunted by something that can control all the infected.

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    Added an answer on March 7, 2018 at 10:27 am

    From my own TV experience, I am infering some kind of vampiric or zombie like pandemic infection with a supra-natural being mind controlling the infected. The ?Logline needs to be more explicit. Also what is safety: an island, a building, ...? When her hometown is ravaged by herd of zombies mind conRead more

    From my own TV experience, I am infering some kind of vampiric or zombie like pandemic infection with a supra-natural being mind controlling the infected.
    The ?Logline needs to be more explicit.
    Also what is safety: an island, a building, …?

    When her hometown is ravaged by herd of zombies mind controlled by supra-natural being, a shy young women must lead the survivors across infected land to safety.

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  3. Posted: March 4, 2018In: Western

    (Re-post) Post civil war, after escaping a vicious gang of ex-confederates running a slave camp in a sequestered stronghold in the mountains, an ex-union soldier seeks to return and free everyone there.

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    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on March 6, 2018 at 11:57 am

    I agree with dpg. Personnally I would even go further in changing the hero from an ex-confederate to a former slave ?who fought in the union side but has now been betray by it. So he is an outsider for both side. He is using the fact that he is a bounty hunter as an excuse to settle old score. WhenRead more

    I agree with dpg. Personnally I would even go further in changing the hero from an ex-confederate to a former slave ?who fought in the union side but has now been betray by it. So he is an outsider for both side. He is using the fact that he is a bounty hunter as an excuse to settle old score.

    When his wife and child are killed in an racist attack, a freed slave discharged after the U.S civil war becomes a bounty hunter and hunt down the men responsible.

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