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  1. Posted: September 3, 2018In: Thriller

    When the prison transfer bus crashes in a remote mountain forest, a rookie officer must use her training to tame the violent inmates as well as survive against dangerous wildlife and a harsh blizzard while they await rescue.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on September 5, 2018 at 10:10 pm

    Yes, under normal circumstances the procedure is to hanker down, but there may be exceptional circumstances. prison may have been due to close down and evacuation was planned before. Maybe the storm has changed direction. ?Prison may have lost power making it unsafe. Or you may have had a contagiousRead more

    Yes, under normal circumstances the procedure is to hanker down, but there may be exceptional circumstances.
    prison may have been due to close down and evacuation was planned before. Maybe the storm has changed direction. ?Prison may have lost power making it unsafe. Or you may have had a contagious disease that requires evacuation and quarantine.

    Strangely enough that over the top situation nearly happen to one my friend.
    Years ago, the French scientific South Pole station had to be evacuated because it lost all power. All scientists had to temporarily move to a neighbouring station. One of my friends, who was doing his military service as scientist told me that they got lucky because a storm was developing at the time. If they had stayed and the storm had hit, they would not have survived. In the Foreign station they joined, one of the scientist was suspected to have measles (in France vaccination is mandatory, so that would have never happen there), so in order to avoid contagion, that sole scientist was confined to their quarter. It turns out that it was not measles.

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  2. Posted: September 3, 2018In: Thriller

    When the prison transfer bus crashes in a remote mountain forest, a rookie officer must use her training to tame the violent inmates as well as survive against dangerous wildlife and a harsh blizzard while they await rescue.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on September 5, 2018 at 2:42 am

    I kind of agree that you are really throwing the kitchen sink and then some to the poor woman. However I like the concept even if it sound so over the top. It reminds me of the movie? The Grey. As said by previous reviewers, you just need to justify at least two things. Why is she on the transport oRead more

    I kind of agree that you are really throwing the kitchen sink and then some to the poor woman. However I like the concept even if it sound so over the top. It reminds me of the movie? The Grey.

    As said by previous reviewers, you just need to justify at least two things.
    Why is she on the transport of dangerous prisoners. Usually seasoned veterans, not rookies are assigned to such transport. Maybe due to a big storm developing, the prison must be evacuated. With the police and the National Guard busy evacuating the population, then everybody even rookie is drafted to help the prisons evacuation. Or you may omit the rookie aspect and focus on something else maybe ?her gender.

    Why does she has survivalist skills that makes her invaluable to prisoners. If prisoners know that their survival depends on her, she will be followed and obey by at least a small groups of desperate prisoners. Otherwise she would have no chance. So maybe the action is taking place in Alaska and she is an Inuit who used to live near the artic circle. That explain her skills without needed the extra gear.

    After her prison transport crashes in a remote part of Alaska, an Inuit prison officer must led a small group to their survival from a hungry pack of wolves, freezing temperatures and murderous inmate survivors.

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  3. Posted: August 30, 2018In: Historical

    When a SS General’s daughter falls in love with a Jewish boy in a concentration camp, they must stand out together to get back his family and help the Jews escape from the Germans.

    Valentin Samurai
    Added an answer on August 31, 2018 at 10:30 am

    Why not go full throttle and switch from daughter to wife. Because of Who she was married to, she can manipulate the soldier within the camp.When the unhappy wife of the warden of a SS Concentration camp recognises one of the inmate as her former fianc?, she decides to help him and his Jewish familyRead more

    Why not go full throttle and switch from daughter to wife. Because of Who she was married to, she can manipulate the soldier within the camp.

    When the unhappy wife of the warden of a SS Concentration camp recognises one of the inmate as her former fianc?, she decides to help him and his Jewish family escape.

    you could create the initial tension by revealing that he decided against marrying her on the order of his family because she was not Jewish. Initially by revenge, she saves his life by forcing him being her servant. Then their relationship rekindles. But the husband is soon back and reveal that all prisoners will be gassed. That’s when the dilemma occurs.

    You could also turn that into some kind of sadomasochistic relationship, with her now firmly in charge. That remind of an old movie?The night porter. A movie not to everybody ‘s taste.

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