1. Posted: September 8, 2020In:

    When medicine and science fail, and the only way to get humanity back on track is to rewind the clock, a group of historians and storytellers sit down to rewrite history

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    I like the concept involving time travel and historians, but what part do the storytellers play? Its missing a conflict and a sense of urgency also. Do they need to create a time machine before a certain date or before a certain event happens? What major conflicts get in their way? Is someone tryingRead more

    I like the concept involving time travel and historians, but what part do the storytellers play? Its missing a conflict and a sense of urgency also. Do they need to create a time machine before a certain date or before a certain event happens? What major conflicts get in their way? Is someone trying to stop them? Are members of the group struggling to work together?

    Their goal is a little vague as well and needs more specificity. Is it to simply build the time machine and use it, or to travel back in time to and change a certain thing/multiple things in order to improve the future?

    Hope that helps and best of luck!

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  2. Posted: July 12, 2020In:

    When a sentient video game character falls in love with the real-life player, she must get rid of the other characters to gain the player’s affections, even if that means rewriting the game script.

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    That's an awesome idea! Agree with the other comments that some details should be fleshed out Depending on which genre you wanted to use, action, romance, etc. (both sound great), maybe she's trying to get the player's attention but he's easily distracted or maybe there's a ticking clock like he's eRead more

    That’s an awesome idea! Agree with the other comments that some details should be fleshed out Depending on which genre you wanted to use, action, romance, etc. (both sound great), maybe she’s trying to get the player’s attention but he’s easily distracted or maybe there’s a ticking clock like he’s either renting or borrowing the game but is getting bored with it.

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  3. Posted: June 13, 2019In:

    A lyncanthropic warrior reluctantly teams with a human princess after a mysterious knight, who slaughtered the warrior’s village years ago, returns and begins attacking humans.

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    Thanks a lot! First time meeting in the story. Ah, I'd say more, but I don't want to give too much away

    Thanks a lot! First time meeting in the story. Ah, I’d say more, but I don’t want to give too much away

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