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  1. Posted: December 9, 2015In: Comedy

    A vampire hunter is frustrated when an isolated Mississippi town decides due process must be followed before she will be allowed to stake a dangerous vampire. – Blood and Justice

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    Added an answer on December 9, 2015 at 8:57 pm

    Very interesting story idea... Just make sure you follow what others have to say and it will make for an awesome story. The only thing I wouldn't personally like is to turn this into a kind of drama, but that's just my personal taste... Anyway, good luck with this! I'd surely hope to see this on scrRead more

    Very interesting story idea… Just make sure you follow what others have to say and it will make for an awesome story. The only thing I wouldn’t personally like is to turn this into a kind of drama, but that’s just my personal taste… Anyway, good luck with this! I’d surely hope to see this on screen one day!:)

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  2. Posted: November 24, 2015In: Thriller

    While investigating a string of mutilations, the ruthless leader of a post apocalyptic settlement must unravel a brutal plot to overthrow him.

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    Added an answer on December 3, 2015 at 4:12 am

    Interesting concept. A few comments, though: If you say the leader is ruthless, the audience would not be on his side, they would actually want the plot to succeed. Maybe if the leader wasn't ruthless, just " tough " would do... In which case, why would anyone want to overthrow him? Perhaps the plotRead more

    Interesting concept. A few comments, though: If you say the leader is ruthless, the audience would not be on his side, they would actually want the plot to succeed. Maybe if the leader wasn’t ruthless, just ” tough ” would do… In which case, why would anyone want to overthrow him? Perhaps the plot is led by an outside force… And maybe the leader should change during the story/script (character arc) from being tough, ruthless, to being a better man and a better ruler(not necessarily nicer, just better)…

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  3. Posted: December 2, 2015In: Thriller

    When Air Force One and a large passenger plane’s engines fail, the hacker responsible informs one of the secret service agents that he has two hours before each plane crashes to either assassinate the President or let his wife and child die on the other plane.

    victortiti89 Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 2, 2015 at 8:53 pm

    The ideas contained within this logline are truly mindblowing! It appears very easy, as concept, when in fact, it is the exact opposite. It would make for a really fine, breath-taking action movie... Just be aware that an " Air Force One " movie has been made quite some time ago as well as some otheRead more

    The ideas contained within this logline are truly mindblowing! It appears very easy, as concept, when in fact, it is the exact opposite. It would make for a really fine, breath-taking action movie… Just be aware that an ” Air Force One ” movie has been made quite some time ago as well as some other plane hijacking-themed movies, so just try to be original in your approach…

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