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  1. Posted: August 30, 2020In: War

    Three outcast friends lead their town’s residents on a perilous journey to save them from terrorists who scheme to enslave their women for the sex trade

    vocajo Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 1, 2020 at 12:41 pm

    I like the idea of 3 childhood friends who were "bad boys" who are now challenged w/ doing the right thing. Can you add some detail about their reputation. And why do the terrorist attack a small town? What's their goal?

    I like the idea of 3 childhood friends who were “bad boys” who are now challenged w/ doing the right thing. Can you add some detail about their reputation. And why do the terrorist attack a small town? What’s their goal?

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  2. Posted: August 17, 2020In: SciFi

    After a programming error a troubled AI developer is trapped in a lab as they struggle to teach their flawed AI the value of human life, and find their own humanity, so the AI does not destroy the world they intended for it to save.

    vocajo Penpusher
    Replied to answer on August 28, 2020 at 6:30 am

    Thanks for the feedback. Humanity needs to be saved from the AI. This was the next edit. After a programming error a troubled AI developer struggles to find their own humanity and teach their flawed AI the values of life so it does not destroy the world they intended for it to save.

    Thanks for the feedback. Humanity needs to be saved from the AI. This was the next edit.

    After a programming error a troubled AI developer struggles to find their own humanity and teach their flawed AI the values of life so it does not destroy the world they intended for it to save.

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  3. Posted: August 17, 2020In: SciFi

    After a programming error a troubled AI developer is trapped in a lab as they struggle to teach their flawed AI the value of human life, and find their own humanity, so the AI does not destroy the world they intended for it to save.

    vocajo Penpusher
    Replied to answer on August 18, 2020 at 2:12 am

    Thanks for the feedback. Didn't realize the AI scientist was confusing. Yes, was trying to be gender-less. Here's the update I'm thinking about: After a programming error a troubled, arrogant AI developer struggles to find their own humanity and stop their flawed AI from destroying the world they inRead more

    Thanks for the feedback. Didn’t realize the AI scientist was confusing. Yes, was trying to be gender-less. Here’s the update I’m thinking about:

    After a programming error a troubled, arrogant AI developer struggles to find their own humanity and stop their flawed AI from destroying the world they intended for it to save.

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