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An overworked suburban mother and professional hit women, reaches breaking point as she struggles to juggle the work life balance.
Is a little ambiguous whether this is the same person.? Maybe you could do something like -? "An overworked suburban mother who is a part-time hit woman - - " The close proximity of "struggle" and "juggle" is a bit of a tongue twister. With a common premise like this, it needs something to set it apRead more
Is a little ambiguous whether this is the same person.? Maybe you could do something like -? “An overworked suburban mother who is a part-time hit woman – – ”
The close proximity of “struggle” and “juggle” is a bit of a tongue twister.
With a common premise like this, it needs something to set it apart from the rest.? Maybe by way of stakes. What’s at stake if she isn’t a hit woman?
e.g.?? An overworked suburban mother must become a part-time hit woman when her child is abducted – – “
See lessA family counselor must conceal her alcoholic secret from her friends and clients over her marriage turning soar.
Looks like an interesting drama. ?? Do you mean "sour"?? I'd mention the marriage first - keep it chronological.? Then mention the alcohol concealment, but also tell us why she must hide it.? I'm guessing it's for professional reasons since she's a counselor, but give us more = stakes!
Looks like an interesting drama. ?? Do you mean “sour”?? I’d mention the marriage first – keep it chronological.? Then mention the alcohol concealment, but also tell us why she must hide it.? I’m guessing it’s for professional reasons since she’s a counselor, but give us more = stakes!
See lessAfter receiving his late mother?s camera, the outcast son wants to become a photographer, but once his older brother, the glorified heir, dies, the manipulative grandfather resorts to blackmail to force his own grandson to take over the farm.
I'm a little confused.? Why does the grandfather blackmail? If we know why the grandfather wants to blackmail it might make more sense.? Who is the main character? - the outcast son or the grandfather.
I’m a little confused.? Why does the grandfather blackmail? If we know why the grandfather wants to blackmail it might make more sense.? Who is the main character? – the outcast son or the grandfather.
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